Sorry Poem by Brianna Kimball

Sorry

Rating: 4.5


I messed up
I made a mistake
How many apologies
Will it take
I tell you I'm sorry
You know when I lie
But if you wont believe me
I might as well die
I cant just watch
I cant just cry
Ill take enough pills
So that I just might die

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 05 December 2014

Ending one's life is against the principle of life and here the poet raises the problem faces by partners of love.

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Achill Lad 04 October 2014

A lovely poem. A tragic tale. Losing someone you love is always a painful experience. It happens to so many these days. You'll get over it, be patient.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2014

It takes courage to say sorry. You have said it boldly. But the thought of: 'Ill take enough pills So that I just might die' - is cowardice. A nice, short poem. Liked it.

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