Treasure Island

Mary Carrillo


Sorrys just a word, it dosent mean anything until its an action


So i say hi
you say hi
we catch up

but then
something happens
i tell you
i was looking for some comfort

but you had something else in mind
you said something and i simply replied
and you said i took it the wrong way

but how was i supposed to take it
you said not to do something
so i took a stand

If you really knew me you would understand
but i guess you dont
if people like me never replied
then who would?

There would never be the 'good' friends
there would only be people like you

but whatever,
believe what you like
and i might just take that advice
and wait for you

Oh yes
and remeber
im so sorry
that i actually cared,
hmm maybe
your the one that needs the advice

Submitted: Friday, February 26, 2010
Edited: Friday, February 26, 2010

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  • Zack Burton (2/27/2010 5:40:00 PM)

    Egh, it seems like just the usual complaints of a usual person. But I guess that's the beauty of poetry. It points out true emotions better than anything else. Nice work :) (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (2/26/2010 1:05:00 AM)

    okay okay aready...thats the last time i try to give you some. ROFL. jk.
    your poem makes a lot of sense. way to stand up for what you believe in :) (Report) Reply

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