Soul Mate Poem by Black Mendilouche

Soul Mate

Rating: 3.0


Soul-mate stale-mate
yielding heart meets steel plate.
Sweet surrender soured by fate
always pining for that date.

(July 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 26 July 2009

Minimal use of words to maximum effect - 'yielding heart meets steel plate' is superb. S :)

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Sally Carter 19 July 2009

Very clever use of words, particularly the first two lines. Like a bullet!

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