Souless Lover Poem by Kitione Moala

Souless Lover



she was my life
my love
my compression
my life
and looked a what
she done,
it been years since i looked
for a source of light
to lighten this darkness of mine
for i have given her my
very soul, but she played
with it, all a long
but what hurts most
was her treatment
toward my loneless heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Vaughan Jones 21 February 2014

Despite the bad grammar and the difficulty with language, this poem is honest and true and gives a fine impression of the loneliness of a love discarded.

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