Sound Of Lonliness Poem by Aisha Alansari

Sound Of Lonliness

Rating: 4.5


Loneliness...
... is a wall..
without its other three sides,
which makes a building from up to down..
fall,
it's not high anymore.

Lonliness...
is an empty brain,
no thoughts, no one with you,
it's two magnets don't want to attract each other,
one on a side and the other is on another.

Lonliness...
is the clouds covering the sky,
it's not because they want to hide,
No! that's the sounds of lonliness.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes I am alone soo that's what I feel especially when my best friend is not with me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elsie Louis 14 August 2012

Nice use of metaphors. :) I especially like the magnets part.

0 0 Reply
R.k Das 28 June 2012

it is a very very nice poem, , enjoyed reading the definition of loneliness depicted poetically, , ,

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success