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Sarvesh Kulkarni (8/22/2009 1:15:00 AM)
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some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes...
but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.
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Christina Phan (8/9/2009 11:09:00 PM)
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You are gd writer
kept it up
You are a such an inspiriation
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Siddharth Singh (8/9/2009 12:10:00 PM)
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The sparkle in the eye together
with the cow took me to the countryside.
Deserves a 10.
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Obinna Eruchie (8/8/2009 7:10:00 AM)
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You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.
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Shashendra Amalshan (8/6/2009 6:19:00 AM)
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your expressions are very good.. that' what I like about your poems, this again is very good..
with love
shan
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Subroto Chatterjee (8/3/2009 8:12:00 PM)
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Sparkling similies....
A recent rush of female/woman idolising, Nikunj? ? Whatever. You're in good hands.
Cheers.
Subroto
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Anjali Sinha (8/2/2009 4:45:00 AM)
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yeh that spark from her eye
is enough to light a raging fire
in your heart
good write
-10 anjali
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Deborah Cromer (8/2/2009 1:46:00 AM)
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Reads well from top to bottom. The last line really was very unexpected! Moooooo! I can hear the clanging of a bell from around the neck of a cow. Very creative and with humor too. DC
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Marilyn Lott (7/30/2009 3:57:00 PM)
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A sweet and cheerful country poem. '10! '
Keep writing and sharing with us.
Warm Wishes,
Marilyn
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