Sparring Ii Poem by Sophia White

Sparring Ii

Rating: 4.0


A thousand mists all swirled about
Obscuring you from view
But then a strong wind from the south
Pierced the darkness through

Down I set my foil and
My mask I cast away
Out of the opaque questions
Ran into the Bright of Day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Landrey 30 August 2006

That's it...very good. Now if only people didn't have to have a dictionary placed next to them when reading your poems! ! jk. I really do know what obscuring and opaque mean. no...really, I do. not that...ah nevermind. -landrey

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