Splinter Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Splinter

Rating: 3.2


She pulled it out,
pain is emotion
rigid and stout
full of devotion.

It violated
all balls of fire
emaciated
he ruled the shire.

It was midwinter
the kettle on
pulled out the splinter
the thought had gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 September 2005

I like this 'piece' Herbert! Some 'Splinters' can be quite painful. Especially, if one has been 'splintered' for the first time. LOL...you are such a 'visionary'.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

I enjoyed this one very much, H. Wow.

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The Master is correct.

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Gainor Ventresco 03 September 2005

VERY CLEVER! ! ! ! Gainor: -)

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Raynette Eitel 03 September 2005

Ah yes, the master of double entendre! Funny poem. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

I didn't actually read into this what I'm seeing Lawrence did but I thought it was a really good poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary

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