Square Poems 05: Runaway Geraniums Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Square Poems 05: Runaway Geraniums



I mowed my lawn today for the last time
this year (I think) . The weather has been warm.
Here it is the middle of November
and my tomatoes are still producing!
My geraniums have done well this year.
They were bigger and brighter than ever.
They also crowded out my marigolds.
The lobelias went by the wayside, too.
Never have I seen anything like it.
Don't stand too close. Who knows what they could do?

Square Poems 05: Runaway Geraniums
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,flowers,nature,weather,autumn
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The picture was taken today,14 November 2016. These geraniums are past their prime now, but I have never seen them get as big or pretty as they were this year.

I call this a square poem because it has ten lines and ten syllables per line. A four-line poem would have four syllables per line, etc.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 19 November 2016

Great poem, however I checked the syllable count on my counter, and it shows line 4 and 8 with 11. It's wrong about line 4, giving 4 syllables to tomatoes, but seems to be right on line 8. Check it out.

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Wes Vogler 25 November 2016

fingers make a great syllable counter and it keeps you young (and human)

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Kim Barney 19 November 2016

It's wrong about line eight also. Here in Utah we pronounce 'lobelia' with just three syllables, not four. loh-BEEL-yuh and if you look on dictionary.com they agree with me. Check it out.

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Tom Billsborough 17 November 2016

Lovely picture. One year I left my geraniums out a day too late. Disaster. A great flower, though and easy to propogate. We get oddly mild winters here. Gulf Stream and we're near the coast. A really good poem.

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