Stab My Face Poem by Braden Patton

Stab My Face

Rating: 5.0


I know you remember every word i said to you,
dont worry, none of it was true.
I know you want me back to stay,
too bad i never wanted it this way.

Now come haunt my dreams,
You make me toss and turn and scream.
I cant get away, its like a whole,
I'll never get out, Ill never feel whole.

This feeling is like a constant spear,
tearing its way into everything i hold dear.
This time i know you'll break the seal,
nothing like this should ever be real.

I tore apart everything i ever missed,
a feeling like this shouldnt even exist.
I never got that last kiss,
this is my final testimony, my last wish.

If you ever see my face again,
I only hope you see me grin.
Your new life is much better, you see
now that you've ridden yourself of me.
^_^

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelby Alwaysconfused 16 November 2009

this is a true and remarkable work of amazingness. lol you go straight to the heart of any reader of anything you write... :) everyone ive read so far has left me in awe. great job... keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! im a fan :))

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Tj Minchew 02 November 2009

If this poems about you it seems that we are in the same boat my friend. a wonderful poem, Keep writing from the heart

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