Stabed My Heart Poem by Ame Bullock

Stabed My Heart



I feel the pain
It 's always me
i wanna take the razer to my wrist
you dont know how bad
i lay in my room all alone in the dark
it makes me think of all the stuff iv gone through
i feel the cold
comeing from all around
i start to cry
what the guys did to me
broken heart
broken wings
broken dreams
all crushed
the tear dropps rolling of my cheeks
im rocking back and forth on my bed
thinking about what he did to me
lieing
backstabeing
it felt so bad life a knofe through my heart
he keeped stabbing over and over
thyere is nothing to take the pain away
he left holes in my heart
the damage still effects me
i start to feel cold again
i lay on my back my arm hanging from the bed
it gets quit
hearing blood dripping
my eyes roll to the back of my head all i see is darkness
it was all becouse of him
he wont even care
he knew wut he did

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silent Speaker 20 January 2010

I disagree with Sara, I think this poem is AMAZING, it shows alot of emotion and i feel the pain. You expressed yourself very well....that does not make a poem terrible.

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Danny H 19 January 2010

this is terrible, and even when time takes toll the wounds wont heal. some grammar mistakes but dont worry i have many spelling errors as well! lol but it was an excellent poem

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