She put stardust on my window.
Piercing love beams through my eyes.
She made rainbows of the raindrops,
Stardust colors in disguise..
She knew answers to the questions,
That have since departed me.
She knew reasons for my being,
When my reasons ceased to be.
She's the one that was outstanding,
When I faltered just a bit.
She's the image through my vision,
And the mold to which I fit.
I shall surely find another
To replace this love I miss.
And I'll know her by the stardust
In my eyes each time we kiss.
So very romantic..it takes the heart away....Nicely written & expressed.
When you asked me to read your poem i wasn't sure what it would be like... but i read it. and i LOVED it! this is very very romantic.
I can see a romantic theme here, but again, this seems very forced to me. You write your poetry like William Shakespeare, and the other poets of his time. For old fashioned poetry it does have a nice message, but again is written in form. Today's poetry should have no form, as long as it tells a message from the heart and soul, not the mind. The two poems I have read were written from the mind, not the heart, because you were thinking about making them rhyme. Don't think poetry, just write as it comes into your head, because if you have think about a poem before you write it, then it isn't poetry but a forced writing from a preconceived thought. Anyway I can only give this and 8 again, because of its message. Barbara
very endearing endeavor. I loved the mystical feel of your words. blissful write.
Absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the read, your imagery is wonderful...Marianna Jo Arolin
You have the natural gift of rhyming and beautiful imagery conveys the thoughts all the way through.I know it's a sad poem but it's happy one when the soul sings.*****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Quite romantic, it touches the Heart softly. Definitely a 10