Staying Away Is Not Really A Choice Poem by Carlos Daniel Neves

Staying Away Is Not Really A Choice

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Staying away is not really a choice
not when i need to ear your voice
i can't accept being pushed aside
altough i know you're not really mine

but that's okey

time passes slowly leaving nothig behind
do i have to do what people say is right?
would it be enough if i sayd what's on my mind?
would you stay with me if i tryed?

But that's okey
you don't have to say a word
that's okay
you already rule my world

and what if you sayd we should be apart?
what would i do, would i just restart?
and what if you sayd we should be together?
am i gonna stay here wondering forever?

But that's okey
you don't have to say a word
that's okay
you already rule my world

Will i be allowed to call your name at night
when we're apart by people space and time?
i still am sorry for not trying to fight
i just made shure you ended up fine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fox Tail 23 March 2012

Very nice. There's like a conflict between two parts of an event happening in the poem and that seems like a new approach to poetry and rhyming to me. Enjoyed the poem and pondered over the spelling.: D -Fox_TaIL-

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