Still Waiting For You Poem by Tyler Olejarz

Still Waiting For You

Rating: 5.0


My will is fading
My bones are aching
Your image lingers
Because you're breathtaking
I feel frozen
Am I mistaking?
My feelings for you
Are excruciating
Your smile
Is a luxury I miss
Could you stay while?
I cant handle this
Its getting harder
To breathe around you
Something in your eyes
says what I already knew
We werent meant
To survive
So how can I still feel
Like you keep me alive?
I guess it's in weakness
where these feelings thrive
While you took a bow
I took a dive
Is this it?
I guess it ends
With you just wanting
To be friends
Its okay
Im getting dimmer
But in my deteriorating mind
Stil you shimmer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 12 July 2011

Wow! A breathtaking, well penned and poignant poem that deserves a 10+++ ten times over. This very impressive write left me speechless for it really touched me, my friend! You definitely have what it takes to make it trough the Poetry World: TALENT: Poetry runs in your blood! Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! ...

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