Let me tell you, the story of a long way,
The story of a farmer, he said: those were the days.
He was pure from his heart,
He was kind and with no hurt,
His only problem was personal sins,
It was a question for him: do the sins let him to win?
So he signed a contract with God,
Then he confirm it with a red beau bud
He thought deeply that now he can win,
Just by avoiding the terrible daily sins,
But God is generous, as an unending sea
He will forgive us, you can wait and see
After a long time, the farmer broke the promise,
He was full of sadness, thought now he will miss,
Now he will miss his goals
He will miss, he will miss the whole
While he was full of hate and sadness,
An angel came from the sky above to end up this mess
The angel said: listen to your heart and think with your mind,
The God always forgive, because he is super kind.
u know i know u know what i think about this poem! .................BRILLIANT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..............u are really talented! u can write freely and fluently.........good for ur friends! ! ! ! : P
I know...we are always committing sin and not doing well each time, but God always forgiving us for who we try to change to be better. He knows our weaknesses because He creates us, but it doesnt mean we can do bad and then ask for forgiveness each time, we need to change life to be better as He asked us to do. A great write from _Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
god forgive us just whenever we forgive ourselves.how can god forgive us if we havent forgiven ourselves? (sorry god i told that) ~nb