I saw
The straight line
For a long time
With great spirit
And enthusiasm,
Suddenly it changed its direction
And became crooked in nature,
For this my refined eyes too retreated
From the line forever
In great pain and despair.
I appreciate your brilliant perception dear Anjandev! Well penned...10++
Life is but not humans or community always straight. More than often crooked in nature as you make clear in your poem. Well written, A.R.
some time later i shall comment 9 poems composed today i used to earlier age tires my eyes o poet straight excuse me for being this time for being late
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In great pain and despair... perhaps because there is nothing so straight in this world, curvy-linear, even time and space.