Stranded And Bereft Poem by Daniel Brick

Stranded And Bereft

Rating: 4.4


From an Astronaut's Journal

I see the sky stretch its arms
far passed the contours of its confinement.
They penetrate the outer space which is
my confinement for whole seasons.
If this were earth, I would be
witnessing a natural miracle. Stranded
on this alien world, I can't tell
if it is miracle or routine. What if
a miracle for me is a tedious fact
of this place? Am I so divided
from any connection to this planet?
Can I ever close the gap between us?

Earth is the Long-Ago for me, I have
no credible time frame. Oh, the beauty
of earth stung me as it receded behind me
in a paroxsym of speed, myself hurled
into deep space. We scoff at the psychological
training at the Space Academy, eager to be free.
We were fully matured human beings, no longer
tied to nature. How arrogantly we severed ourselves
from the sea of feelings, the tides of emotion,
the swelling of thr heart. Even now the old language,
the poetry rushes into a mind purged for cognition.

There is an owl-like bird native here.
I hear his mournful cry cut through
the descending clouds as sunlight dims.
Before they smother me, and deepen my aloneness,
I listen for him. Is he protesting the deeper
darkness, or is his song just an event parallel
to nightfall? I want to see the owl's fierce red
eyes illuime this darkness, make it light
to my touch, weightless to my sight. I want to be
reborn as a child to this place. I want to assume
my place in this nature....

Thursday, May 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: science fiction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 15 May 2017

To see life through an astronaut's eyes, it's an amazing poem. How one might feel, stranded in space, away from the comfort and warmth of home, it's all so realistically drawn. I feel for the astronaut who for the sake of human progress leaves the beautiful earth to live a solitary life in the weightlessness of space. A profound work. It makes the reader love the earth more. A huge 10.

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Bharati Nayak 12 May 2017

I it a a poem of science fiction or a poem of life and death or about darkness and light , i am not sure.But poet's love for this earth is apparent in the poem when he says- - I want to be reborn as a child to this place. I want to assume my place in this nature....

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 May 2017

I like the line, make it light to my touch, weightless to my sight. Thanks for sharing..

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