Strange Love Poem by Myla Rose G.

Strange Love

Rating: 5.0


You put my life in a place
That‘s full of love and happiness
You swept away the sadness
That you‘d seen in my lonely eyes
You filled my empty heart
Full of joy and contentment
You picked up the scattered pieces
And fixed my broken heart

You made me laugh
When I‘m about to cry
And when you hold and squeezed my hands
I felt like I‘m floating in the air
I felt the softness of your palm
That is so good to touch
So good to feel the warmth
So good to think that I‘m in a safe place

You pulled me closer to you
And found myself in your broad chest
It was warm and very comfortable
I put my right hand in your heart
And felt ‘twas beating so fast with doubt
I don‘t understand why
I looked up to ask you why
But your eyes were closed and filled with tears

I hugged you tightly
Hoping that you‘ll do the same thing
But I noticed that you‘re pushing me away from you
I closed my eyes wishing that it‘s not true
But a hot liquid rolled down my face
I opened my eyes full of tears
And saw you walking away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 06 October 2013

mm... Simply lovely. To watch a lover walk away is the most painful thing.. when you've gotten so close.. Keep up the wonderful writing. Really enjoyed this piece.

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Howard Savage 10 January 2016

This poem has a great perspective on love.

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Onuora Ilodibe 03 January 2016

How amazing you pen your emotions, poetry like food to the soul and yours are nutritious

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Chinedu Dike 29 May 2015

Disappointment and heartbreak felt in the bliss of love, well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, nicely articulated and subtly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Abhishek Mishra 07 October 2013

Lovely...a heartfelt poem: -)

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Benjuzzy Okpuzor 06 October 2013

I opened my eyes full of tears, and saw you walking away, keep it on baby. More of that

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