Strip Tease Poem by Remya Sasindran

Strip Tease



and this one was amusing.

as each layer,
each tired layer,
melted, peeled or slipped off,
the reflections
on the aging mirror
had stories to tell
and lullabies to sing
to ears that were too well-versed
in human conversation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreelekha Premjit 21 April 2011

wonderful reflection, Remya..... the use of aging mirror is interesting... a case of transferred epithet.. good.

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Remya Sasindran

Remya Sasindran

Nilambur, Kerala, India
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