Stubs Poem by Harrison Kirk

Stubs



Sitting here,
alone.
All I see is
Stubs.

Left broken,
Lonely.
Lacking which makes whole.
Needing Nicotine's kiss,

That eternal bliss.

If only! Stubs cries
And
Conscious
Dies.

A death of thought.
The battle cry of memory
echoes in my head
But still Sulphur sucks,

Triggering my Nicotine
twitch.

Conscious knows the meaning of loss,
As synapses skew.
But my want is few,
At least without you.

Nicotine.

Our time burns too quick,
And my fingers slip
As I struggle to grip,
That smoke you spew.

And even if I choke
On that potent smoke.
I cannot find
A way to satisfy my mind.

Leaving me,
Wanting that tantalising
Toxic taste.
Your sulphurous smell.

And Nicotine's warming kiss.

But the brighter the flame,
The shorter you burn,
We end our game.

The flame is lost,
At such tragic cost.

You leave me a stub.

You stamp on my Heart
And turn the flame,
To coals.
Your heel grinds,
as you turn away,
and my existence eeks,
from beneath your feet.

Your footstep trauma
Echoes
Inducing drama,
Of the quick foot step
As I witness my own death
Where my heart turns to Tar,
The further from me you are

And my tears run hot,
as Sulphur sears that spot.

And now I'm left in the gutter,
where my soul drains
And my body shall surely follow

In haunted dreams of Nicotine sorrow.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thank you for reading! I would be extremely grateful for any criticism you feel generous to give me :)

This happens to be my first poem, I've never written before- let alone tried my hand at poetry- and after a night out with my girlfriend I was waiting at the bus stop, obviously it's late, and I was running out of ways to entertain myself. I looked at the floor beneath my feet and noted the cigarette butts lying there, after coming over the initial disgust at the shockingly high number of them, I realised that they must feel somewhat similar to me at that point in time. Yet I couldn't call the poem 'Butts' or repeated that throughout so I settled for 'Stubs', wrote the poem on the back of my Stagecoach Megarider and felt somewhat chuffed. I have not edited this poem since, even though I dislike many parts, I felt it somewhat more appropriate to leave it as raw as it came.
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