Suicide Poem by Andy Harding

Suicide



It’s just one shot
It shouldn’t hurt
It will all be over soon

My life has lost
My hate has won
My time is finally up

I’ll pull the trigger
I’ll shoot the gun
I’ll end my pain tonight

It’s time to die
My life is over
I’ll kill myself by sunrise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 13 November 2011

Although it shows pain, hurt and hatred, but it flows beautifully, and this is magnificent so as to interest the reader, it's a Masterpiece! :)

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Pondering6649 H 13 November 2011

Interesting poem....painfull to read. I think it would hurt, I think the poem was nicely written and to the point. Life can be hard but the impact of death on others can be unbearable.

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