(02/15/92)

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Suicide Kid

As she read the note aloud
Her voice clear and loud
'This is what she wrote
Her suicide note'
There were gasps all through the air
For everyone seemed to care
They said she was so great
But their compliments were too late
Her note read like this
'Nothing in my life is bliss
And no one sees the tears I cry
You will only care once i die
Perfection was only a minor concern
Love is what I yearn
This pain you say you now feel
Is probably not even real
As you sit there and moap or gloat
What you just read was my suicide note'
No words were spoken
No silence broken
No child whined
And no one shined
They were all put down to dirt
To see how much she hurt
This was her master plan
To hurt the common man
To feel the way she did
Little baby suicide kid

Submitted: Monday, March 12, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, February 01, 2011


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  • Amy S (3/2/2008 12:06:00 AM)

    This is amazing! !
    I really love it!
    <333

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  • delet my account dlllsd (1/25/2008 4:08:00 PM)

    i love this.




    just like i love you.





    : D p.s. you left your necklace at my house.

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  • Madly In Love (3/12/2007 9:38:00 PM)

    really really touching keep writing

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