Fragrant summer blooms
Come in captivating crowds
Sweet butterflies dance.
Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Very nice, I also works when you read it backwards, very creative and elegant
Just right for the last Summer days. Truly enchanting and sweet.
A whole field of flowers with a sweet smell attracting even butterflies!
Excellent Haiku. Sweet usage of the poetry form. The third line discovers itself in most assuring way. Brilliant
Such heart touching thoughts to dream and reflect upon! ... Again such beauty beyond words that I could express! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beautiful beautiful imagery with such heart moving sentiments and feel this! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Lovely personification of blooms! Love the word 'crowd'. A succinct gem! Delightful imagery!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Exquisite imagery. And as Bill Cantrell has observed, it also works when you read it backwards. In fact, remarkably well. Was that your intention, Rose Marie?
Thank you, Richard. No, it was not my intention. I haven't noticed it until you and Bill mentioned in your comments.