The image of a dry land
The image of a dry face
Come alive
With every Summer
The string of Summer
Is always attached
With rain
As rain can only
Wipe away
The dryness and
Release the tears of pain
That lie under
Forced smiles of layers
The Summer
Can bring alive
The cuckoo's song
Heard in spring
In the chequered path
Of white and black
The dream of rainbow
Not always realized.
'As rain can only Wipe away The dryness and Release the tears of pain ..... yes, it is. Amusing depiction. A captivating poem I like most. Thanks for sharing such a gem. ....10
Rain! ! ! ! A dry land needs water. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
As rain can only Wipe away The dryness and Release the tears of pain That lie under Forced smiles of layers very fine comparisons dear Bharati, all those who have suffered a lot will understand the meaning of your poem.. thank you. very much. tony
This is such a beautiful poem. I always think of winter and snow in these terms, but you've shown me a new lens with rain in summer. Your images and word choices are rich with promise of rainbows. Wonderful. Pam (Jette) ...still working on your write up... ;)
i'm not sure what you are saying here: As rain can only Wipe away The dryness and Release the tears of pain.............and i wonder if you want As rain can only.... or As only rain can... .....................................................to me there is a difference. :) smiles of layers........again, i don't understand. if it were layers of smiles i MIGHT understand. i'm 'not good' at interpreting symbolism, assuming that is what some of the poem is: symbolism. in the U.S. summer follows spring, so i don't know why you talk of the bird's song coming alive in summer and then speak of it being heard in spring. am i 'missing something'? ? i think so. :) :) i don't know the cuckoo's singing schedule here. i've only recognized cuckoos twice in my whole lifetime of 'watching birds'. i must not visit the 'right' places. bri :) bri :)
Many thanks for reading and commenting on my poems.It is my great delight to know that you enjoyed my poems and rated quite few of them.I surely look forward to more of your visits to my poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly, summer's rain is more joyful than the monsoon
Thank you very much for your kind comments.Happy to know that you enjoyed reading it.