When the sun slaps you
in your face
and turns it red
you say;
thank you
for your warmth
and strong embrace
you have colored me
with your grace.
Loved it...you teach us a golden advice here...brighter than the sun
Wow. Perfet natural poem. I really like it. Specially the idea of slap of sun. I myself used it as a slap of drops of rain. I'd write it in web later. Good job dear friend.
When the sun raises over a little blue humble planet and frist rays of light kisses your sweet face. GOD will smile for the beauty he has made, when he made you. Lovely write 10sssss RANDY~*~
you say; thank you... nice one and thanks giving poem....10 you must thank all divine powers, as they unbiasingly favor
this rubicand encounter.... lit up the dark silence...
Novelty of thought.So beautiful expression. The word picture stupendous.In a nut shell---wow!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh that is so beautiful Kasia, short and sweet.