Kasia Fedyk

Wow. Perfet natural poem. I really like it. Specially the idea of slap of sun. I myself used it as a slap of drops of rain. I'd write it in web later. Good job dear friend.

When the sun raises over a little blue humble planet
and frist rays of light kisses your sweet face.
GOD will smile for the beauty he has made,
when he made you.
Lovely write 10sssss
RANDY~*~

you say;
thank you... nice one and thanks giving poem....10

you must thank all divine powers, as they unbiasingly favor

this rubicand encounter.... lit up the dark silence...

Novelty of thought.So beautiful expression. The word picture stupendous.In a nut shell---wow!

Loved it...you teach us a golden advice here...brighter than the sun

Short but very beautiful and meaningful.

Kasia, you always refresh my mind, thank you.

That's not a slap, that's only a love tap! ! :) Perfect little poem Kasia! You might enjoy one of mine titled, Ask The Old Sun.

Oh that is so beautiful Kasia, short and sweet.