DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Sun Light Hits The Water..... - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

SLACK tides, smooth edges,
metal eyelets, drifting
in the cold snow.
MAN overboard,
man overboard,
CLIFFS and rocks, pitch
and plunge, a drum getting
louder, as you stagger off.
MAN overboard,
man overboard,
DEPTHS and weights,
ghost and saints.
a child waiting for
his father to love
him, as his son.
MAN overboard,
man overboard.


Comments about Sun Light Hits The Water..... by DAVID GERARDINO

  • Rookie Ruby Root (10/4/2006 6:42:00 PM)

    Sad poem David but very creative. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 36,775 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/4/2006 4:26:00 PM)

    YOU SET AN INTREPID STAGE HERE, MY GOOD FRIEND...STRONG IMAGERY CARRYS A WELL CRAFTED WORK TO THE FINISH LINE FOR A 10...''''''''FRANK (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 29, 2006



[Hata Bildir]