Sunrise Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Sunrise

Rating: 5.0


I woke up this morning with a planned thought in mind:
Visit the beach to watch the sun rise beyond the horizon.
I did ❤️
It was breathtakingly beautiful as usual.
Despite this fact the sun was surrounded by clouds.
A little thought in my mind wanted to drift away with me
(focus on the clouds)
I almost wanted to turn my gazed towards the clouds.
Appreciatively I refocused my attention on the sun.
It was imperative that I stayed in touch with why was I there.
I was there to see the sunrise.
Oh my was the sight so magnificent. My mind sifted.
I stood in awe gazing at it and got lost in time just taking
Photos as it progressively rose higher and higher.
This was truly a sight to behold.
In spite of the clouds it rose so gracefully.
The atmosphere was tranquil!
There were people of the same mindset sitting around, some with children, others walking by, and of course there were some in the water...
The birds were flying by without a care in the world.
I felt liberated. I felt at peace. I felt the presence of God!
I felt compelled to do several sets of stretches.
It felt great being out by the beach watching the sunrise
Connecting with nature is non comparable to anything
I could think of at the moment 🤔
Peace and Liberation at its best!

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,nature,peace,sunrise
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beach trip Friday, November 27th 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 09 January 2021

Definite 5Star plus! ..................... May you always enjoy feelings of such! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 09 January 2021

The beauty of the Lords tranquility! .. Beautiful heart expressed! ..

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2020

Tranquil atmosphere! ! ! ! Beauty of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2020

Connecting with nature is non comparable to anything I could think of at the moment Peace and Liberation at its best! ! ! ........so touching and true. Beautiful poem on Nature and sunrise is well executed. Thanks you very much. Five stars.

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