That glowing orb of yellow daffodil
Darkening from yellow to orange glow
From the west faint embers that thrill
A shimmering breeze that dips below
The horizon like a mirage in a desert of sea.
From the east darkness spreads its dark cloak
As night creeps slowly in what must be
The closing of the daylight hours now broke.
Sweet nature governs what you and I now see
That orb, now gone, just a dim faint glow
Marks the end of today and what may be.
A nice imagery 'sunset' yellow then orange, orbs now gone, very meaningful Mr.David Thank you (anapeastic start indicate the quick movement, so restlessness resides somewhere if I am not wrong then)
A beautiful nature piece capturing a serene moment that so many of us take for granted. Very uplifting and so well written. Thanks for sharing.
I can see it. What a beautiful sunset. And thanks for sharing such a lovely scene with us.
The lovely sun set is mirrored in your beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it, David!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Marks the end of today. thanks. good write.