Superbity Poem by Reason A. Poteet

Superbity



Sicilian quintain ABABA

Subtitled: The Bully
'Who, What, When, Where, and Why'

Reflect on bullies - quarrelsome dictators.
The elbows shove, intimidating others
at ev'ry chance, before, right now or later.
In school, at work or anyplace he druthers,
the bully has to prove himself, the greater.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This piece is a fairly good representation of iambic pentameter with feminine rhyme.

5 feet (beats) per 10/ll syllable line, with the beat on even-numbered syllables. da DA, da DA, da DA, da DA, da DA da
With feminine rhyme, the last syllable in the line is unaccented.
conversely, with masculine rhyme, the ending syllable of each line is accented.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 November 2014

i'm a fairly unstructured poet, ..... i think. so i guess i'll not try one of these, especially if i have to pay attention to word gender! i have written and enjoyed writing some limericks, but i usually am somewhat 'free' with my poetry except that i almost always use four-line stanzas and almost always use extensive rhyming. thanks for sharing. superbity? hmm? bri :)

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