Surrender Poem by karen sinclair

Surrender

Rating: 5.0


The waves were subtle
As you led me in
Half moon
Full moon
I can't quite remember
But your hand was strong
Supportive was your praise
Then
Backstroke in November

My mind was muddled
But you let me be
All me
Just me
You were tender
Your tempting tongue
Was impeccable
All I could do
Was serenely surrender

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 22 June 2012

A fantastic poem, to want and to be wanted is the best. a great write.

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2012

Very seductive - great poem.

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A sweet song of submission!

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Chuck Audette 18 July 2012

Love your word choices and mood in this.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 28 June 2012

in your mind a moment to to touch as well taste...woman is all she can be at that special moment...you bring that moment into view...on the sands...under the stars...a kiss...a hug...wow...speak of romance...shame has no room in a place of such ah's and ooo's...you let the seductiveness built...I say no more..but very candle-ish in that romantic way...thanks...

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Godfrey Morris 27 June 2012

Captivating words.... Lovely

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Danny Draper 25 June 2012

2 stanzas,1 poem, encapsulated in that serene surrender. Beautifully romantic.

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