Sweet And Bitter Boomerang Poem by Rini Shibu

Sweet And Bitter Boomerang

Rating: 5.0


Love is sweet
If it's meant for you
And if it's all yours
No matter how far slips
It will bounce back
like a boomerang
But be careful
If you don't know this play
It may fly back
hit and injure you
And you will say
Love is bitter too

Sunday, January 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: bittersweet love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, Boomerang has a negative tinge in its meaning. So, in the first part of your poem, the positivity inetended by you woes not come out the wat you have tried to.

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Rini shibu 24 April 2018

Is it..Thank you so much for your view point

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

Your 'Sweet And Bitter Boomerang' is elegantly crafted Rini, Liked it......10

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks Dillip for your great comment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2018

A very lovely and insightful write. Loved the first 2 lines.10

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Rose.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 07 January 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about sweet and bitter boomerang.

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your comment Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2018

No matter how far slips! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Edward Kofi Rini

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