Sweet Dreams Poem by Richard D Remler

Sweet Dreams

Rating: 5.0


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There is a
Cream-filled center
Of the Universe
Right beside the Milky Way,
Where Chocolate Covered Raisins
Sneak into the stars to play,
And powdered sugar
Dusts the moon
As Chocolate Chips fall through
That sea of Cotton Candy,
And Sweet Molasses dew.

Copyright © MMXII Richard D. Remler


**A Children's Tale**

Sweet Dreams
Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: candy,childhood,fantasy,humor,imagination,nebula,space,stars,universe
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"If you carry your childhood with you, you never become older."

~ Tom Stoppard
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 08 April 2019

Universal sweetness One might say, A sweet lover's dream Told in a most musical, Original, And delicious way. Loved it!

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 April 2019

sweetest poem- As Chocolate Chips fall through That sea of Cotton Candy, ..//

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 April 2019

An inspiring wonderful poem, Richard.....10+++++++++++++

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