Sweet Temptation Poem by Sandra Feldman

Sweet Temptation

Rating: 5.0


Vibrating rhythm
Traveling verse,
Flowing in waves
What comes first?
The idea or the rhyme,
Or is feeling, the sign?
There's no written order
Nor universal formula,
Inspiration is magical
And just like
Temptation, it happens
Like rain falling
Or the miracle
Of Love's
Incredible, calling.

Sunday, March 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling,unique
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 01 April 2019

So beautifully well said, Sandra. We lose our muse at times but when we find it, it is like magic! Loved the flow of your words in this wonderfully written poem! You inspire me.

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Kostas Lagos 01 April 2019

Let inspiration flow! Wonderful poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2019

Travelling verse transfers rhythmic waves and poems carry such waves as these come out from mind of a poet. This is an excellent poem shared.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 March 2019

A marvelous and fabulous poem, dear Ma'am Sandra....10+++++++++++

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