Sweetest Downfall Poem by Hermione Femalton

Sweetest Downfall

Rating: 5.0


Like a candle disturbed
By a closing door,
She said his name, she smiled at him
And left him wanting more.

Like the flower and the bee;
They're never fall apart.
Like the lover and the maiden;
He captured her young heart.

She's never felt that way before,
Unable to defend.
Coz he's her sweetest downfall;
And she'll love him to the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 10 February 2009

Nothing wrong with love - LIKE A CANDLE DISTURBED - that is like a vain of gold in a poetry gold mine.

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