DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

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FLYING flocks travel in flight,
another faulkner puts down his
shovel, and writes, writes, and
writes,
spare me the out cry,
spare me the empty familiar,
spare me muddled spirits,
and write the words with your
own red blood,
FLYING flocks travel in flight,
sextan turns up, with her freind
plath, and they both begine to
write, write, and write, yippee,
says the words, for these words
will end up in a paper back book.

Submitted: Friday, October 20, 2006
Edited: Thursday, October 21, 2010

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  • Rookie Ruby Root (10/21/2006 5:04:00 AM)

    Hi David, Very different, I like this poem, It's unique but your writing positive. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,565 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/20/2006 1:33:00 AM)

    WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh!
    nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,565 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/20/2006 1:33:00 AM)

    WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh!
    nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allan James Saywell (10/20/2006 1:07:00 AM)

    paper back writerrrrrrrrrrr, paper back writerrrrrrrrrr, yippeeeeeeee
    good write david i enjoyed this one,
    worth a vote so vote i vote
    for your poemmmmm

    AJS (Report) Reply

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