Symbolic Verse (3) Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Symbolic Verse (3)

Rating: 5.0


Title: ☂

When winter rain comes and sings.
When waves of wet weather moves,
When you want to go in cold rain,
You Just imagine how you go on way!

You hold ☂ 💧 after 💧 and hold 💨,
You burn wood and sit near 🔥 holding ☂.
☈ goes away and 🌕 hides under ☁.
☺ under ☁ looks like ♦ ♥, ♦ ♥ ☂ ☂ ☂,
★ ☆ & ☆ ★ ❄ ❅ ❄ 🌀 🌁 ☇ ☇ ☇!
⛄ ☻ ☺ 🌀 ♦ ♥ @ $s ☺ ☼!
Next day ⛅ ☺ † † † † † † ♪ ♪ ♪ ∞.
☂ ☺ ☼ ☾ ☽ ⛄ ♪ ♪ ♪ & $s ☺ 🌂 🌄
And ☺ seeing 🌅 and 🌈 in so far 🌌.

God's wonderful creation and nature
We see and our sky is an open umbrella,
Standing under this we see sunrise,
Feeling God's grace we thank him a lot.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,24 November 2018. All rights reserved.

Form: Symbolic Verse

Symbolic Verse (3)
Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,nature,sun,weather,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet Kumarmani Mahakul has introduced this new style of poetry writing expressing the feelings with symbols and naming this as, "Symbolic Verse, " on date 23 November 2018. This is just newly introduced yesterday. In this verse a poet expresses his inner feelings poetically not in words or sentences but he or she expresses his or her feelings through various symbols. Other poets, readers and visitors understand the message given in poem analyzing the symbols and exercise their intelligence and share feelings. Poets who are interested in writing poetry in this symbolic verse can write poems using various symbols. This verse type is new and this is not included in previous form list of poetry writing however we hope that this will be included in form list in future and definitely it will be accepted by poets and readers. Writing a symbolic verse poem is difficult but still this is lovely to see symbols in poem and understand and this is enjoyable. In this verse the poet can add previous and end notes writing few lines in words and along with words the poet can use symbols to express his or her poetic thought.

Poem writing Form: Symbolic Verse © Kumarmani Mahakul,23 November 2018. All rights reserved.

Note to this poem: This poem is written abut life, mathematics, love, living and calculation. Symbol * means star, symbol ∞ means infinity, symbol •means black smiling face, symbol ♣ means club, symbol ☺ smiley face and symbol ♥ means heart. Symbol 🌄 means sunrise Over Mountains, symbol 🌅 means sunrise, symbol 🌂 means closed umbrella, symbol 🌀 means cyclone, 🌁 foggy weather, ⛅ means sun Behind the Cloud, ⛄ Snowman indicating light Snow, ☾ last quarter moon, ☽ first quarter moon, ☂ means Open Umbrella (the title of the poem) , ☼ means light sun, ☁ cloud and ☈ means thunder storm and ❄ means light snowflake, ❅ means tight trifoliate snowflake and ☇ means lightening.

Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,14 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 24 November 2018

I love this form of poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 November 2018

Winter rains! ! With the fragrance of life and the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dogma Daniman 24 November 2018

This form of poem is lovely. This astonishes me. I have tried to understand many symbols. Title of the poem is a symbol of open umbrella right.? ?

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 November 2018

its great innovative and like it for it great 10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 December 2018

I understand, man learned to communicate thru verse, rather than poetry if we go back the early days of civilization. Even today certain dialects singing in their rendition. Before a language evolved, people communicated using symbols. Symbolic verse might prove to be a journey in search of our roots.

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Dylan Chris 29 November 2018

So many symbols speak about your emotion and we hear the story narrated through symbols. Thank you genius poet for introducing this new form and writing beautiful poems. I love the way you express and play with words and symbols.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 November 2018

A wonderful creation. A new style of poetry writing that might pave the way to another poetic form. Congratulations for your utmost dedication to Poetry A great Poet always think of new ideas that might enhance Poetry. Beautifully crafted write.

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Muzahidul Reza 25 November 2018

Fantastically the symbolic poem is penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 November 2018

I think I almost decoded...or, better say, I felt a sort of joy under the umbrella in the rain...a lovely felling, and a lovely poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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