Taking Notes Poem by DAVID GERARDINO
Taking Notes
YOU bent me, my love,
your blades penetrated
my heart, my soul, my eyes,
leaving me with nightmares
even in the day.
YOU bent me, my love,
like a leave dropping to
the ground, you catch me,
then slam me back down.
LIKE a fossil, this love
is dead,
LIKE laughter, its got to
end.
YOU bent me, my love, still
there is hope, and a hint
of love in the air.
DAVID...PASSION- IMPACT DRIVEN PIECE, HERE...THIS WOULD MAKE FOR A NICE TWANG ON A TUNE, AS WELL, AS A GOOD READ''''''''''''''FRANK...10!
i liked this a lot David. especially the line: 'you bent me love' increases the impact you have on the reader! HBH
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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DAVID...PASSION- IMPACT DRIVEN PIECE, HERE...THIS WOULD MAKE FOR A NICE TWANG ON A TUNE, AS WELL, AS A GOOD READ''''''''''''''FRANK...10!