Tales Of A Child Poem by Abdulsamad Brainbucx
Tales Of A Child
Once upon a time,
Tales of a child in his juvenile prime
Parents were broke
No attention got paid on time
Was never acknowledged of his crimes
The environment he grew upon was in misery
Whoever knew him said His lifestyle was a mystery
Sabotaging the present, repetition of history
Met a brick wall,
A detriment of progression,
A gentleman living in fragility
But care less for protection
Indecisiveness could be the spine of his
Predicament
Lonely and deranged but the expression will never Unveil
Time changes all, and time change is tough
Time changes all, we see how time changes odds
Time changes all, detriment of progression wall
Time changes all, pray time break this wall.
Thank you for your support...I will surely take to correction
Rewrite this stuff in lines, try using rhymes or repeated words to add emphasis; then you become a poet. You also need more imagery! Read other poems and poets, too! You shall surely be fine! Welcome on board! ! ! Mar' aban hallan wa saalan! ! !
Wonderful thoughts, Abdulsamad. A nice style and rhythm. My only suggestion would be to lay it out in single lines and not paragraph form. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Peace
hello, members please I need your comments about this poem... thank you
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I would like to translate this poem
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thank you.. will surely take to correction