Tangled Poem by anais vionet

Tangled

Rating: 5.0


I put my hands on the table after you..
I drink from your half-empty glass..
I sit in your still-warm chair.
I signal you but I am a candle at noon..
I call you but I am a snowflake at sea..
Please don't go anywhere without me..
I long to be your shadow.
I want to taste you like food..
A hundred emotions tangled like hair..and trivial words..

Thursday, October 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: romance,teen,crush,longing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
so close and so far - wanting is not enough
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 01 October 2020

Bravo. Il est tres bien. Its a good poem really showing you are pining after someone. A normal puppy love teenage crush. Well done

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Kostas Lagos 01 October 2020

I long to be your shadow. , what a powerful line!

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Paris, France
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