*tanka 11: Raindrops Collect Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

*tanka 11: Raindrops Collect

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on the elm leaf's tip
raindrops gather after clouds
have rolled away,
catching enough of sunset
to transform them to a flame

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Sonya Florentino 13 August 2009

magical! magical! (had to repeat cuz PH won't accept just one!)

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