Tanka 33 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka 33

Rating: 5.0


neither rich nor poor
when derives the benefits
Moon under the sun
Fully exposed, seems funny
Time to reassess the steps

Wednesday, October 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: government
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This tanka is aimed at Government policies.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 26 April 2021

Simply brilliant.....thank u.....

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2018

Fully exposed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muzahidul Reza 10 October 2018

Moon under the sun Fully exposed, seems funny, great lines, meaningful with imagery, thanks for sharing

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