Heather Burns

Tanka The Oak Tree - Poem by Heather Burns

The oak tree stands tall
firm under the winds of life
refusing to bow
admonishing the lineage
that can master it's being.

Comments about Tanka The Oak Tree by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 20,853 Points Daniel Brick (9/1/2014 8:23:00 PM)

    I like the tanka form, and I think the extra syllables/lines over the haiku gives the poet a chance to clarify, even develop further her/his POV. And I love oak and willow trees. I was primed to appreciate this poem! I especially like the closing lines in which this oak encourages other oaks to fulfill their destinies. What pride! What a sense of honor! Obviously, I'm making the connection between the natural object and how it connects to human things. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (7/4/2014 4:53:00 AM)

    I like tankas and this is a fine example. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 4, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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