Taring Me Down Poem by Vanessa Svaleson

Taring Me Down



You laugh and criticize me
You build me up to tare me down
You were nice but now so mean
You made me cry in front of people
You laugh at me to brake me
I broke are you truly happy
I can’t stand you
You made me cry
I shut down from the world
And hate builds inside
I lost all my friends and never
Ever looked back
You made me feel stupid
And blind
You kept laughing I died
My heart of 1 turned to mush
The pain the hurt
I can’t
I won’t
You will pay you will
And I’ll never look back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mandi Ducroq 07 May 2008

How sad for you angel. I totally understand this poem (unfortunately) . You will get through this, I have, and you will be stronger and love again. Right now you don't want to, and even you did, it seems unlikely, the pain is all consuming, but you will. Hang in there. This is a beautiful, raw poem, I can feel the pain...

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