Tear Filled Sea Poem by Logan Glover

Tear Filled Sea



standing all alone surrounded by faces
no one notices me
eyes down at my laces
my tears fill the sea

nothing ever changes
feeling so bad
shot at close range
and it feels so sad

nothing else left to do
be alone be alone
they will say who knew
there deepest bones will atone

they wont know what they did
till they see the kid

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

simple and to the point. i love it. great write.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 October 2007

yet spilt with just enough subtlety for effect. love it, logan. keep on.

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