dew drenched lotus
cleanses my heart
rain drops on the rose
refresh my heart
but, but, the tears from your eyes
tears at my heart
a beautiful bloom
torn torn to pieces
or
lotus awash in dew
cleanses my heart
rose spotted by rain
refreshes my heart
but, but, the tears from your eyes
tears my heart
a beautiful bloom
torn torn to pieces
Praise for your eloquent poem. I believe that God counts every tear that falls. Thank you for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler
A VERY SENSITIVE READ JOHN BETTER THEN ANY WAR STORY A REAL POEM AT LAST VERY WELL DONE RODNEY
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
No buts about it John! Excellent expression in this gorgeous little poem of yours. Thanks for sharing it. 10 from Tai