Telling Me Lies Poem by alicia smith

Telling Me Lies

Rating: 4.8


When we first started out
We were doing good.
Then i found out you was
Just playing with my heart
Tearing it all apart.

You made it so easy to fall for you
But so hard to get over you.
The girl i met, that you said was just a friend
Was really ya girl that was just waiting
For me and you to be through
So she could be the next official girl in your life

Why couldn't you have told me the truth
Now im sitting here stuck
Sucked into this misery
Looking for something or someone
To soothe, what you tore in two.

One thing, I cant get over,
And never will understand is
All the Lies
You could have been real with me
But now its over
And you will forever be
The one that kept telling me lies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 August 2008

It is always the lies isn't it. That is what really hurts the most when love fades to black. There ought to be a law against not telling the truth to someone you love. This writing expresses that so clearly. I highly recommend this piece. GW62

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 August 2008

...well penned indeed.....10+

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Mark Nwagwu 08 August 2008

feelings red hot still; deep feelings xpressed; it will be well, now you've written this; a clean uncluttered heart is yours.

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Sara Lane 07 August 2008

this is an amazing poem well done!

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