Tender Breeze Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

Tender Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Why would I have lotus
from the lake?
If I can embrace your fragrance,
I would rather
kiss the petals within.

Long nights went by
with insomnia
longing to see
a blessed dawn
Yet I've made countless necklaces
with pearls of tears

Future is dried off
by the nasty summer in the past
Be a tender breeze
to have my life back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 12 November 2006

Praise for your mystical poem. Keep up the good work. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 October 2006

Scattered pearls of tears in the tender breeze dragged me to some kind of meditation?

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Kee Thampi 27 October 2006

with pearls of tears I feel really a prostrate....in this verse....

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