Text Image Poem by Ludovik Celaj

Text Image



Our image,
It is being viewed,
In all the edges,
Of it in whole,
Skipping the likes,
Instead been reviewed,
Exelerating in thee exitment,
Of a new wide world

You over here,
And over there,
In a motion cheerful,
With goodness grace
Heart laughing,
& Mind clapping fear,
That's how we are,
Going to rock it i here.

Text me body,
tonight i am sweet
About the pedestrians,
going bearfooted on the beach
You don't have to call me,
for a night out
Because we both
will be sharing one each.

Nov.30.2012

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Good indeed
Faheem JawaidNEW354 days agoGood read it was! Comment +1

great
vesna kurtovicNEW423 days agoHi Ludovic, wow thats romantic and crazy.....by the way you look goodComment +1

November 30.2012*

Ludovik CelajNEW423 days ago>*********************Comment +1

Great
Lirije BekteshiNEW423 days agoVery niceComment
1 Comment+1



Ludovik CelajNEW423 days agoThank's for your review'sComment +1
Nice work

Sam SammyNEW354 days agoNice rhythm flow Comment 0

Interestingly good
Peter J BrownNEW423 days agoI enjoyed this... it is a little different which makes it good :) Comment +1

:))
Filip M. DunicNEW423 days agoNice one :) Comment
1 Comment+1



Ludovik CelajNEW423 days agothank's for 'ur reviewComment +1
ok
Khalil GoddardNEW423 days agoInteresting.Comment 0

Nice
Donald LoudonNEW423 days agoInteresting!
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