Thank You Poem by zeinab sherif

Thank You

Rating: 5.0


thank u! thank u!
never gona believe what I say
Alas! it came out of my mind today
I was faked by u.

I thought u were my friend
Who shares with my every moment of my life
But I found that all of this was just a pretend
But u won't stop me&my way I'll drive.

My heart never concealed any bad feelings
Towards u, but it had a doubt
About your love 2 it&with weepings
I say ''I won't regret my saying aloud''.

I was shocked from what I 've seen
Don't u remember 2 u what I've been
I've been more than your breathe, when u were in a worry
&my pride I crash&say I'm sorry.

I didn't see the poison in your river
I was drinking but disgusted from being poisonous
But I won't do it again, never ever!
2 drink from a river before checking it's pureness.
=====================
every one feels terrible when he faces a truth like confessing that your lover is a betrayal, what do u think? send your opinion after the comment, please.
===========================================

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 19 June 2009

what a romantic poem is this one too..means you write very romantic way..whic great.. liked it very much...10+++++++++

1 0 Reply
Merna Ibrahim 14 June 2009

The person must be careful, specially in this era....the most thing that I hate is the'Betrayal'..because it is really painful.....nice poem..keep it up..Merna

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 18 June 2009

! 0s good write.............

0 0 Reply
Carol Gall 19 June 2009

betrayal hurts good poem

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 01 September 2009

Good write.......10sssssssssss

1 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2009

thought u were my friend Who shares with my every moment of my life But I found that all of this was just a pretend..it is indeed good poem.....itiwas not love ut pretent......i love it....10 read mine thank you...miss i miss u

1 0 Reply
Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 August 2009

it is a good poem / .. ....

1 0 Reply

betrayal is a sign of an inside grudge which finishes all the time by tragedy! ! ! surely, the criminal hearts are the cause of this disease... betrayal is a sign of weakness! ! ! interesting poem! ! ! nice topic! ! ! keep it up...

1 0 Reply
Sara Here 01 July 2009

perfect zeinab as usual..great work keep it up betrayal is painful, it hurts deeply..I don't know why I remembered Blake's Poision tree while reading your poem may be because death is the right end of betrayal...Thank You zeinab for your poem.I truly Love you and love your poem

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success