Daniel Chapman

Rookie (AUG 04 1982 / DETROIT)

Thank You - Poem by Daniel Chapman

Not sure If Im deserving of a Thank you
NOt really sure what I should say back to you

A Thank you Here A Thank you There
Please dont Thank me Cause im not happy here

Not really trying to be mean, just a little confussed
Not saying as a joke, if you think so please dont be amused

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  • Rookie Deanna More (2/6/2007 6:50:00 AM)

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    This short, succinct, powerful poem reflects the brutal reality of War and the severe emotional toll and ravages...it inflicts on all Soldiers.

    It is so understandable, when, at times, a 'Thank you! ' is TOO much of an out-of touch, bubblegum, alien...niceity, for a brave Man (who's in the midst of Hell) ...to hear.
    ''Oh, Lord! What mayhem + tragedies, those eyes of yours, must see.''

    Daniel, your words are riveting! ! ! ! !

    (A limit of only 10 marks...seems so un-fair. This poem is a Blue Ribbon Winner!)

    Deanna
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 4, 2010


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